You. Will. Feel. Love. Don't. You. Dare. Give. Up. |
by Just Lucy
Awww thats really sad, i loved the ending of it, i understand the pain in this poem, great work |
Thats really good |
by Void
Another amazing poem. I saw your rating, and I can honestly say you deserve more than that - and I will be more than happy to raise it a little... The poem itself was to me flawless, you got out so much feeling with your words, your statements and your repitition of lines. This line will probably forever be burned in my mind: |
**everyone feels love at some stage, the person u love must just be the wrong one ** |