I Feel The Love

by RainbowSlider   Nov 10, 2005


The world is the background
that you are painted on.
I see the women
that my woman is with.

I follow you
and am with you
when we are
with others.

When I see you
and what you write
when your words
are written there.

When I see your smile
when other people are
smiling like I smile
when I see your smile.

When we share
and it is no
longer I
because you are with me.

When I try to express
my feelings
of how I feel
when I am with you.

When I am away
but still you
are in my thoughts
when I am thinking.

When you become
more important then me.
When I long for you
and nothing else matters.

When our friendship
becomes unbearable
because you are
not there to share it with.

When I hug you
and try to draw away
but still you
do not let go.

When I kiss you
after kissing others
and your kiss
I can feel.

When I kiss you
and one kiss is not enough.
When I hunger
from wanting you.

When I feel
my hunger filled
after being with you
and I am with others.

When I am thirsty
and I drink from your love
and I feel so full
because you quench my thirst.

When I give to you
and you give to me
and I feel part of me leaving
and I feel the part that you gave.

When others kiss you
and I am jealous
because I felt
that my kiss that you gave.

When you hug
someone other than me
and I felt you
gave my hug away.

When nothing else matters
but being with you.
When I am not alone
because there is we.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    Whoa-this is fantastic!I can so relate to much of what you say.I am a sap for love poems and this is a good one.I really like your play on words in some of the stanzas and lines.Very creative use of language, but it is the emotional content that strikes me most.You are quite talented and it shows from the many great poems I've read by you.

  • 19 years ago

    by Karla Gordon

    Feeling it.. your sweet!