by RainbowSlider Nov 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
The world is the background |
Whoa-this is fantastic!I can so relate to much of what you say.I am a sap for love poems and this is a good one.I really like your play on words in some of the stanzas and lines.Very creative use of language, but it is the emotional content that strikes me most.You are quite talented and it shows from the many great poems I've read by you. |
by Karla Gordon
Feeling it.. your sweet! |