XoX

by Luke   Nov 10, 2005


Sitting here with my head bowed low, people pass without a word.
Seeing nothing and caring the same.
When I look up I see thier lies, controlling mindws and hearts so cold.
They see nothing fall, bleeding, from their self-indulgence.

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  • 18 years ago

    by nadsyy

    Hey dis had heaps of emotion...i lyked it 5/5
    n its sad.....keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by Gemmie Lou

    Chucky its so sad xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    It's really good, it's quite powerful, good choice of words, really cool poem

    -Stacey

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    Awww thats really sad, i loved the ending of it, i understand the pain in this poem, great work

    ~**Lucy**~

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