I loved the last stanza. Great poem. =]

Fantastic as always! My favorite stanza is the last, as usual.

This is fantastic.The swimming metaphor is cool and works well.It is full of excellent images and descriptive stanzas.I love oems of love and loss(believe me I've wrote enough of them!)but I will say when you have love, real love, it is worth years of pain and longing for even a few brief moments of true love and passion.Nver regret loving someone.And though relationships end, as long as you hold on to that capacity to love in your heart, someday love will come and never leave, or at least leave you with beautiful memories.Anyway, really great poem.The last stanza really has such emotional impact.

Who'd u write that about lala! U and Brianna with ur secret boyfriends!