Beautiful. it speaks so clearly to the reader (me) and the flow of it is perfect. none of the rhymes seem forced, and the vocabluary is great.

Ruby

note: stop changing your name so much! it makes it really hard to find your poems!!

I agree with Ruby on both points! But great poem anyway, I have often felt like that and reading this made me feel less alone...always a good thing.
Loved it, keep writing.
*VioletRaven*

'For to really get to know me'
Is there a missing 'you' ?

Hey this is an interesting poem. It's like you're shouting out 'hey this is me!' It has a dark feel to this poem, you make it really unique and different. The last line kind of surprise me, I thought you'd write something like ' this is the real you' but instead it's distorted. Kind of like a twist, at least to me, lol. The flow is there. Enjoyable. =)

My fav line "And not exactly tall".....lol, sorry it had to be made.
Kool poem.

Darkest Wishes
Matt

Hey u are truly telanted!that is exactly how i feel dfferent wired and crazy just coz i see a different side of things then most people!I LOVED EVERYTHING ABOUT UR POEM! thanks 2 u i now dont feel so alone! luv ..josie..

Very very good poem,deep feelings and emotions,i feel the words and i feel the pain of the one in the poem..just wonderful :)
(ramy)

I hear you suz
I could add a few million more names that Ive been called but I'd rather not bring them up
I really liked the poem by the way there's not one that I can criticies about. . .damn
lol
Em

Really great poem - I think we are very alike!!

Peace. [Sole]