by Lady Vengeance Nov 10, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
Hi, how are you? |
Oh crap, what did I do that time???? |
by Dreams
Hey your first stanza really draws me in. Very different, makes me want to read more. The fourth stanza is great, it shows some attitude. lol. It's again like a twist, it becomes a sad poem. I thought it'd be the other party who'd get hurt. This is felt. Again, enjoyable. =) |
by ShadowDancer
Great job again!! it feels as if i have stolen your emotions when i read your stuff. its all out there in the open |