Great job again!! it feels as if i have stolen your emotions when i read your stuff. its all out there in the open

Ruby

Hey your first stanza really draws me in. Very different, makes me want to read more. The fourth stanza is great, it shows some attitude. lol. It's again like a twist, it becomes a sad poem. I thought it'd be the other party who'd get hurt. This is felt. Again, enjoyable. =)

Oh crap, what did I do that time????
lol, sorry simply assumed.

Matt