Wow..this is really good I really like it...is it a song or something and the words in [] are the backing things? Anyways it's really good...If you have time check out some of my poems, it'd mean alot...

I love it!

Thnx for the comments everyone x

Wooow...
that makes me silent.

I like it, good job, your a great writer so keep it up

This is really good hun.... ur a great writer
keep ur chin up
luv always smiling oxoxo

Its a nice poem, but just a bit confusing, and im sure it reflects on how you feel. keep hopes high high high! up in the sky dear ;)