*breathless* I really enjoyed this poem! You did a terrific job, and I liked it a lot. Hope you keep on writing! Great poem!

I really liked this part
*Their cold and dark fate
Their lowered eyes and shuffled steps
I canâ??t get their ways
Humbled, beaten, buried deep
Measured are their days
God, how can this come to me

you have talent gurl, take it and do something great
luv em

This is a good poem. I hope i can write more like yours in the future and hope you also write more.

Nice poem

Bee-u-tiful! My first poem's not NEARLY as graceful! lol!