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by master of shadow   Nov 10, 2005


Light has ebbed from all existence,
Grey shadows are all thats there,
where ever I look misery can be seen,
Grey shadows just out of sight,
my existence is full of darkness,
Grey shadows always there,
milky light is all that will enter,
all over light cannot get in,
I am trapped in this dark existence,
with the Grey figures hiding out of sight,
I can't escape, can't get to the light,
trapped here in the darkness,
here away from all light.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Falling Up

    I think u should call it Inevidably Grey. i liked this poem, as well as the rest of your poems i have commented on. keep it up and hope to see some new poetry from you to comment on. thanks for entering the contest

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    How about Shadow of the Night, My Stormy Shadow, or My Pendumln Shadow. Anyways....lovely poem. good bless keep writn'. XXLISSA

  • 19 years ago

    by Natasha

    Just noticed, already have a trapped =p sorry, my bad.

  • 19 years ago

    by Natasha

    I think this is one of your best poems... I like it very much indeed.
    name sugestion: 'trapped'

  • 19 years ago

    by M MEM

    This is pretty good, some of the lines could use a little work. but i know how you want to get away from the light. i know it.

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