This is pretty good, some of the lines could use a little work. but i know how you want to get away from the light. i know it.

I think this is one of your best poems... I like it very much indeed.
name sugestion: 'trapped'

Just noticed, already have a trapped =p sorry, my bad.

How about Shadow of the Night, My Stormy Shadow, or My Pendumln Shadow. Anyways....lovely poem. good bless keep writn'. XXLISSA

I think u should call it Inevidably Grey. i liked this poem, as well as the rest of your poems i have commented on. keep it up and hope to see some new poetry from you to comment on. thanks for entering the contest