Nice poem you should check out some of mine 5/5

So Prateeksha...what are you waiting for?? As far my knowledge goes...Prateeksha means-Waiting...right??

Well to be honest, the motive behind this poem was superb & so was the starting. Not even a single word used was weak but still (i think) it was not written as a poem should be.

Though i am more into dark poems but then its a art where category doesn't matter..right? I am not trying to say that i am a great writer but i just tried being honest. Hope you would take it in best of your spirit.
Take care and keep writing...Love...Nitn Mongia

An amazing poem.....keep it up buddy.