Amazing

I hope things get better and that you'll find something to believe in. Great job in getting your point accross. I think "hell" was a bit overused and the flow could be better. That's just my opinion, otherwise I liked it. Very emotional and I can tell it comes from the heart. Keep it up. Take Care, and thank you for commenting on my poem, I appreciate it and I hope your friend finds the help he needs.

~rolo