A Fake Me

by Nahibi Maldonado   Nov 10, 2005


You look at me
And I act to be
Perfectly normal
But some how it's over
You look at me closely
And I'm just hoping
You won't see
What I screen
You ask what's wrong
But no one know about this wounds
I think you know
And I don't wanna let you down
I don't feel proud
And wish we would bond
I feel so demented
And wish I could change everything
I'm thinking to end this pain
It would be for the best
Maybe when I'm gone
This will all me lost

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fat Girl

    Great poem. thanx 4 the comment!

  • 18 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Good job!! Thank you for the comments, but I always feel that way about my family, so I can't really change it, sorry. Keep on writing!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandee

    Hey thanx for the comment on my poem. your poem was really good 5/5. i like the part where you say everybody looks at her and she seems/acts normal

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany01

    Thanx for commenting on my poem and this poem is great 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by ~Broken~And~Twisted

    Amazing

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