I've never read a tornado poem that was this good. awesome poem and relly creative i really love it! i like tornados and think they're intresting, just not when they are happening. the good thing about Michigan is we don't get them too often.

~Jacklyn

This is cool-a poem where the author is a personified tornado-very clever and unique, and very well written.Excellent rhyme scheme, great images.

It's awesome!

love sammi
keep writing!
:)

It is a pleasure to read your work, Holly. it leaves me at a complete loss for words! well done seems far too trivial for what you have written here!

shobhana

Awesome!!! i have witnessed tornadoes, being from the midwest myself. you capture the power of it perfectly. great flow and imagery. good job.

This one is officialy my favorite. Are you like a language teacher or something? you should check out my poem im new here its called twisted love.

I love ur poems, they are so deep and understandable.

Oh, my God what a wonderful description of a devesting natural force. Awesome as usual. Loretta 5/5

Wow, i never thought of Mother Nature as being so angry. but then, we all have our days... I really like "just like a freight train/ but a thousand times more loud." i'm not even sure why that one line stuck out to me so much - maybe because the number 1000 is such a hyperbole. dark, but powerful