Well done! Poetry is so therapeutic. It's an amazing thing to be able to write and express your feelings rather than keep them bottled up.
Oh yeah just one thing. In this line:

"all loosing the lid"
I think you meant "all loosening the lid".
Take care~Holly

Yea i did, thanks i'll go and change it now =)

I Agree Poems Are Awesome Release! This Poem Is So Beautiful Yet So Short! You Intrigued Me With It And Made Me Wish It Were Longer 5/5 *Friends For Life* I Love Ya Hun! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

I loved the rhythm. it was a great poem.

OO, that's nice. Can't think of any suggestions - well done :)

I really like this poem of yours. It's short, but very to the point. I've found that writing helps me sort out my emotions too. Keep up the amazing work!
> Kiesha