The ice cube

by Becky   Nov 10, 2005


Sprinkle it on
a nice thick layer
place it on top
press it down hard

feel it burn
and feel the cold

clench your fist
feel the pain
love the pain

when it stops burning
simply add some more

keep this up
until the ice is gone
until the pain and hurt is gone

�*~*Becky*~*�

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  • 19 years ago

    by xEmmax

    The feelings and emotions are very vivid in this one, its written really well explaining the ice cube thing! keep it up,
    emma xxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by unnoticedXlove

    They pain n hurt mite b gone... bbut the scar shure wont me tehehe!!! those are some good times... i heart you!!!

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