But tommy wasnt a good person. you and him were friends at one point? he almost raped that girl. and he woulda killed your girlfriend if you didn't stop him. you saved 2 lives for the price of one. and that one life being gone might of saved lives in the future. you have done more to help then what you think. but you still hurt because of it. it hurts knowing you did that, just don't look at it much. keep walking in school, don't look down. just keep livin ya know?

Man dis is deep i like it if it really happened well im sry ive lost some real good friends to suicide broke my heart. but dont end up doin stupid shit lik i tried live everyday like its ur last. keep it up man. 5/5

Wow, I almost cried... that is a really powerful poem aka story. I'm sorry you had to go through that in your life, It can be tough sometimes... Keep up your poetry, it is strong and it brings a very good point to the table.
---Ashley