Hey, this is good... I find those types of poetry very hard so this looks like a master peice to me!
I really enjoyed reading it, it felt so strong and powerful!
Well done x)

I'm very impressed, I think it works really well.
Great write, hope to read more of your work.
*VioletRaven*

Man... It was damn good. I liked this part especially: "Eternal torture exhausts the soul" So beautiful, yet so dark. Great job!

I especially love this part of your poem

"...Broken wings lie with shattered dreams
Eternal torture exhausts the soul
As distant fantasies fool the torn heart."

its so deep! another great job!
*5/5*

LaterZ,
BX Girl

A nice poetry.........