by asia[imperfection] is alone in the world Nov 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
These tears burn my face |
by Ali
Hey asia i love this poem! its really good it kinda reminds me of my fiery tears poem.you should chekc that out..Anyway i like your words in this poem better them some of your others because i love what big elaborate words like "everlasting" will do to a poem. the flow was pretty cool too.nice job! |