So, so, so, so, SO amazing. Wow. My jaw dropped. (Well not really, considering I was eating a Crunch bar) But it really was fantastic. What a great total metaphor, I loved all of it. Great job. Fabulous decription, and I loved how youmade the knife "your friend." But if you cut, please don't. Anyways, full points.
You're in my favorites. =)

____________________________Matt_______________

Hey this was so excellent, loved the words and flow xxxx hope everything turned out okay xxx

Emski, so completely amazing, honest to god your poems are all so damn powerful, i keep saying each new one is my favourite, but they just keep getting better. Astounding poem ham, love it, love you xxx

I really really rate this poem emma, that was amazing it really truly was. God damn girlie, u just keep getting better an dbetter

Wow seriosuly everyone of your poems i read gets better its amazing and they all have such powerful meaning behind them and so much emotion, i feel like i can relate to all of them honestly , and i loved the metaphor in this one and they way you worded it i wish i could write this good, keep em coming i can't wait for a new one

lots of love
☼*~*Becky*~*☼

I like the last 2 paragraphs the best but good poem..Lissa xox

So sad but so good..awesome job! i love your poems..

Thanku every1, ur comments are really
lovely xxx

Yes, all of my poems are real experiences, feelings and emotions. thank u so much for all of ur comments, and every1 keep up the great work!!
much love,
xxemmaxxx

Sad but also understanding! I really like your work!! Awsome talent!

Hey u gotta lotta talenta nd i read suma ur other poems and ..... W0ow they're really gud nd i think u need to kep riting!