You write about an interesting subject... I just finished reading a book that I think you may like.... "Under the Overpass" by Mike Yankoski... if you havent read it you should

WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

*tear*..I've never cried so hard reading a poem that I have this one (not even harder then poems written for me)..I am in awe..I just...i don't know what to say...This poem was written EXTREMELY WELL for one..not one thing that needs to be critiqued, but for two, the message of this poem is just...is there even a word for this?! In my heart I have so much I want to say about this poem but I can't find the words. I just want to tell you that you've deeply touched me. You inspired me and motivated me to go out and help others. The Lord truly has gifted you. I see you are not taking that for granted and neither am I. tonight I Will pray for this poem. I will pray that many read it and understand the message your saying in it. I'll pray it will be on the top rated list with 200 comments. People need to read this and be touched like I am. If not, know that you have touched a 14 year old. I loved this poem, you are a terrific poet! 5/5
Kind Regards,
~Chelsey~

Iteresting... i like this poem... alot...seeing as i just met you haha!

Very touching and quite a powerful message. Beautifully done.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Very well done. I enjoyed reading that poem, very entertaining. The faithful message also pleased me. Great Job!

Excellent work - a well flowing and complete story. Kudos - DM

Wow, that poem was amazing. I was realy very touched by the message you gave and the way you decided to present it. I was impressed with your knowledge and use of the bible in such a way. Not too many people care about religion and the Bible any more, so your incorperation of those verses really added to your poem.

-Tainted Miko

“we walk by faith, not by sight”
2 corinthians 5:7

Def. one of my favorite verses.

I really liked this one, it kind of showed that homeless people aren't necessarily druggies. Lol...

Good job!!

joy*:..x

I just found your work, This is one of the best poems I`ve read so far, I think we think alike. I think you`ll see what I mean if you would read two of mine "Danny" and"Lost ones" I would love to see if you agree!

Wow,Ok that made me bawl my eyes out first off.And what inspired you to write that?I liked how you made it so you were the rich man and you were giving his point of view. I also liked the whole Bible thing Im a pretty strong believer.Any ways it was really beautiful.I wish that I could write like that.

Your poem is wonderful and not only that but it also has truth to it.It makes other have a different look on life. I look forward to reading the others you have writen.

This poem literally made me cry..... my God............ this is amazing