WoW! Great job! This seems to be a deep yet meaningful poem! I LOVE it! Keep up the great work! I'm looking foreward to more of your poems!
~Sammy

Wonderfull....ive never beeen able to express how i feel in short poems...smth qhich u hav doen wonderfully...
dhaval

Good job....this was an awesome poem....u are really good at writing poems!!!