Short it may be..it was very fun to read...I loved it Liz....I finally tried to write a poem about nature..check them out if u get a chance..they are called (Black Rose, White Dove) and (Wind Swept Sea)...thanks Joclyn

Short yet it's enough to express what you've wanted. Great choice of words used to describe what is intended.

'As the stars laugh,
The moon is mocking'
I really like these lines, it's different and unique.

I personally prefer night to day, and this poem capture my interest. Your dislike is well portray here. I like it! =D