Great poem! it's filled with wuch sad emotions i hope everything is going ok

"Only the the emptiness." maybe i'm reading that line wrong your you acidentally just typed the twice. just thought i would bring it to you attention.

great poem though it flowed nicely. perhaps one of my favorite ones by you keep it up!

~Jacklyn

Steven...

A triumph of poems! Very impressive write with deep emotions. You sound very trap and extremely empty. A tale of sad imprisonment.

Keep smiling (",)

Simon

I am shackled and bound.
An invisible gag.
I have no escape from this incarceration,
There is no ground to be found.

Steven ...this part says so much I am taken in by the use of these words...
You can feel the emotional sadness throughout the whole piece ...
Your writes are always so meaningful and expressive ..
Another brilliant piece , my friend

Wonderful work. Honest, touching and heartfelt. Diction and flow just flawless. Very thought provoking with much visionary passion.

I have added you to my favourites list I have really enjoyed your style.

Thank you for your comments. Please check out my latest poem "Love and War" I would be very interested in your opinions.

I look forward to reading more from you.

Kind regards
Hayley