'He felt she was to good to be his wife'
Is it 'too good...' ?

I really like the concept of using a black rose and a white dove to describe this love. The last stanza kind of surprises me, I thought she'd be a black dove, but instead she chose to be a white dove. Nice one.
The first stanza is really sad, it brings tears to my eyes.
I feel that the dialouge kind of disturb the flow, but maybe it's just me, nonetheless, I really like this a lot, I just had to keep reading it. =)

Yes, I liked the concept, the poetry flowed a little awkwardly, but all in all was quite nice.

Good Writing!
beth

Wow i think this is one of the best poems iv'e ever read and that s sayin alot b/c iv'e read thousands...keep up the great work

This poem is very special. you seemed to have used your own type of pattern and way to describe your feelings. Well done.

_Farewell

Love, interseting, and very well put:)

never give up hope hun
Jenn