by RadianceInReverse Nov 11, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Captivated by a wind swept sea |
Nice...now it's one of my fav 2...very cute...unique...very interesting poem...never thought of wind swept sea before... |
by Pure Silence
Good work, just work on the stanzas, you know i like form but thats just me:) lol great subject matter, maybe take it further |
I though that it was pretty good. |
This poem is is very very good keep writing. |
by Truest Lies
Niced it has emotion...but you could have used just a little bit more imagination to further capture the reader's interest. |