Niced it has emotion...but you could have used just a little bit more imagination to further capture the reader's interest.
But still, I liked it!

Good Writing!
beth

This poem is is very very good keep writing.

I though that it was pretty good.

_Farewell

Good work, just work on the stanzas, you know i like form but thats just me:) lol great subject matter, maybe take it further

jenn

Nice...now it's one of my fav 2...very cute...unique...very interesting poem...never thought of wind swept sea before...