Wow awsome write, I love the last 2 lines! 5/5

Wow this whole poem is so sad but is great!
The flow was perfect and you told a story in it and I really enjoyed how you named out each member and it really was a window to your soul..
Its definatly a 5/5..
The ending was great! Really finished it off..
Your a great writer well done!

First, your family is huge! =) This is really great, you had me going to the very end. Emotions spread through every lines and you had the flow right there. It's easy to read and understand. The way you link each member to the next, the transition is really smooth. Great work there and this is your first poem?! =D

Wow! I really like how you worte this. it was a brief description of your whole family and i love it! seems like mine but it is only me and my parents! ha! but i couldnt imagine having such chaos and insanity! I really liked it though!

That sounded to me like it was one person who was all these things. thats probably not what u wanted but thats what i got out of it. it was so sad but yet a laughed at the end. i dotn know why. good poem though.

This is really good. It's very descriptive and the flow was good. This is my favorite poem that you've written. It's really cute & I like it alot. I look forward to reading more poems from you. Great job! Keep up the good work! 5/5***