My White Satin Bed

by Forsaken Redeemer   Nov 11, 2005


Took a penny from my pocket,
And threw it down the well,
Closed my eyes and made a wish,
Then watched it as it fell.
Walking home through the graveyard,
Feeling the whispers of the dead around me,
Treading carefully through the graves,
Moving, oh, so silently.
Thinking about my wish,
That one drop of hope,
Feel those Dead tighten their grips,
Beginning to softly choke.
Pushing them away
And staggering quickly on,
I'd thought I would be safe here,
Now I know I was wrong.
Remember my wish,
And I'll struggle to make it through,
Those words I whispered in my mind,
How I wish that they were true.
And so I run from those feelings,
Those souls which plague me,
I trip and stumble and tear my feet,
Desperately wishing that I could just be free.
I find my hole in the ground,
Find my white satin bed,
Climb in, remember my wish,
'How I wish I wasn't dead...'

© Copyright of Holly Nia Goodson

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  • 19 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    The title hinted of the ending and I thought that the flow was good not choppy. The words fell together quite well. The ending..nicely done.
    ~Faith

  • 19 years ago

    by never_quite_me

    Hey:) great poem. its really cleverly written, good twist at the end:)
    keep smiling
    xxxxxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xX-jess-Xx

    I really love how you write! its hard to explain....but,i love your dark ones, theyre so moving. thanks for the comment by the way! jesxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Tr!c!a_s@tanicangel

    Hey there your poem was really good. how i wish i was dead as well!

  • 19 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Wow..I loved it..I love the end..its so suprising and unexpected..Awesome..Love Joclyn