Wow, that was really amazing. It made me happy at the begging, sad in the middle and then really happy in the end hehe. Great work!

Wow i hearts it^_^

Thank you so much for your comments! i will return the favour :D
chantelle i loved your "broken soul"
and yoour are me fav heartbroken!!!

Not my favorite... but still good u definetly have a lot of talent so keep it up...thanks for the comment on my poem...it means a lot! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

And we have a winner! hehe, that was my favourite of all your poems - simply because the tsunami was devistating and you put a really sad story with it. The only thing that made it hard to read was all the weird symbols, which I know are put in there when you try to post up the poem and it is by no means your fault. But maybe trying to edit it again would help, because it does take away from the poem -and that sucks because it has nothing to do with your writing. Anyway, I really should get to bed, and I wish I had talked to you more, but I was helping a friend.I'm glad to have read your poems :) and hope to see more. --I read some of your love ones too,they were really sweet and beautiful, but unfortunately i'm never able to rate or comment those without getting signed off :(. Really great job though! Keep up the good work!

That was really great. u pictured it so well Dhaval........
a bit long but made me cry 4 a while...
keep it up!
bharti

So sad..almost cried....good job!

Lissa