by Lu Nov 11, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
This poem was done with a very special girl (Chelsey)who has touched my heart in many ways ... |
by neens
You two did an awesome job. I can't really find anything to say that hasn't already been said. Wonderful poem. |
by kareeenuhhh
Yes...we all have them inside...somehow...anyway, loved it! keep writing!=) |
by stephyG
Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy.. |
Good work. i especially like the way it was written. I mean that in the way that you took different stories and put them all in one poem. I'm not sure what my favorite stanza was, but it was either the opening stanza or number seven, i also quite liked the second to last stanza. |
WOW.... I didn't know where you were taking me. It was a great ride. And yes, We are all of those people at some point in our lives and we learn to overcome our problems. That's what life's journey is all about. Learning as you grow. "Those that do not learn from the past are condemned to repeat it." GREAT JOB |