Luanne! OMG this poem was so much fun to write with you! So glad you volunteered when I was looking for someone to write a collab with!! Me and you together are like turtles taking on a bull! We did a great job and although we had our slow moments (muah lol) we turned out with a great peice! I loved this and am really looking forward to working wit you again!
I love you!
~Chelsey~
A.K.A your A.I.D (angel in disguise)

Beautifully done. A wonderful reminder that the past does not always have a grip on the present or future.

This is by far the best collaboration I've ever had the pleasure of reading. The message is breathtaking. The poem gave me chills. I love the way yall told the past. Then recounted what they have in turn become. Also the last two stanza's, just wow! I don't know what to say....this is completely beyond words! Well done~Holly

This was one of the best collarbations I have read in a while....Absolutely beautifully done....Love Ann

Luanne & Chelsey,

OH WOW, very heartfelt and such a powerful message. We can all overcome our problems from the past if we truly want to and this write shows exactly that....... you both did such an amazing job with this write, you brought tears to my eyes. Wonderful job.

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

WOW.... I didn't know where you were taking me. It was a great ride. And yes, We are all of those people at some point in our lives and we learn to overcome our problems. That's what life's journey is all about. Learning as you grow. "Those that do not learn from the past are condemned to repeat it." GREAT JOB

WOW.... I didn't know where you were taking me. It was a great ride. And yes, We are all of those people at some point in our lives and we learn to overcome our problems. That's what life's journey is all about. Learning as you grow. "Those that do not learn from the past are condemned to repeat it." GREAT JOB

Good work. i especially like the way it was written. I mean that in the way that you took different stories and put them all in one poem. I'm not sure what my favorite stanza was, but it was either the opening stanza or number seven, i also quite liked the second to last stanza.

Brad

Omg..ur poem is soo good ur so talented..well done! Xoxo sTephy..

Yes...we all have them inside...somehow...anyway, loved it! keep writing!=)

You two did an awesome job. I can't really find anything to say that hasn't already been said. Wonderful poem.
~neens~