Comments : Blood hitting the ground

  • 19 years ago

    by (*andrea*hurtinside*)

    Good, wrong title group, not your best.

  • 19 years ago

    by The heart the soul the love

    Am the first one who r/r/and commented great job

  • 19 years ago

    by The heart the soul the love

    And if i added to more of your depprestion and pain am sorry am truly sorry

  • 19 years ago

    by Torn

    Wow u are an amazing writer..but that's far from the best choice...however at the same time i do understand..
    that probably makes no sense but hey.
    I could relate to a lot of that, the whole concept of tryign to stand up again, and just keep on getting knocked down...
    hmm...ur on my favs:P
    take care xoxoxo

  • 19 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    Wow... im in awe... this is absolutely amazing!!! wow, wow, wow... that's all i can say. keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 19 years ago

    by Cristian Teo Regalado

    That was real deep robert. You showed true feelings. Anyways nice poem c u at school tomorrow

  • 19 years ago

    by PatheticLittleGirlxx

    Hey dere i read like 6 of ur poems dere so good!!! i gonna read all of dem but dere so many^_^ and dere all good!!!!!! lol i especially like dis one is so beautiful i hearts it!!! can u read some of mine*blushes*

  • 19 years ago

    by Matthew A.

    Good poem but.....never mind. This is a good poem though.

  • 19 years ago

    by Yasmin Hussain

    I simply love ur poems...... u r awesome.....really!!!!!!!
    keep it up! ! !

  • 19 years ago

    by Katie Bennett

    OMFG!!!! I love this. Beautiful it is, however distraught it was. Simple amazing. You remind me so much of me and how I write, and I feel I can rleate to you more!

  • 19 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    WOW....I loved that..you have such awesome writing..hey maybe for a change u should read some of my poems....lol...not all of them are dark...ne way great write once agian...Lots of Love..Joclyn

  • 19 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Wonderful as always...I really can't comment on ur poems...cause it always leave me speechless...lol...

  • Amazing. beguining a bit dragging, but brilliant language and flow once you got into it. well done. it was fantastic