Wooo. i like. i hope its not real. :) this poem gripped me from the start. i like the way everything is "how?" its questions, but it also gives you the answers. i think it's very effective, but also quite sad...... :(

This is really expressive which makes it an awesome poem. I could really feel your emotion while reading this.

Great poem, shows a lot of emotion and feeling. thats what i look for in a good poem. Flow and rhyme are good too.
~~Sweetie

Awww this poem is really good, yet really sad!

I hope you get better and start writing again =\

Amazing....you are an extrodinary writer, it got me right from the start. i have the same feeling towards my dad, not the same moments, but i still understand. wonderful, keep it up.

_maddy_