Stinkin' Imagination!

by LOnightOJmareVE   Nov 11, 2005


I'm here by myself, alone
as the breeze starts to get cold.
I don't really need anybody
because its you I wanna hold.

Gazing at the dark,blue sky
and humming songs we used to sing.
These winds in the cold, dark night
your memories they bring.

As I watch the stars brighten the night
I see your eyes, at me they stare.
Convinced that its only an imagination,
I said to myself, "I don't care."

I started thinking of you more
as tears keep running down my cheeks
Because I miss you a lot
but you're as far as the mountains' peaks.

All of a sudden, I saw a shadow
that almost caused me fright.
As it wiped away my tears,
in the dark, chilly night.

As I turned around my back
to see who's hiding in the shadow.
I fell down on my knees
'coz it was just an imagination I know...

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This stinking imagination drives me crazy!

Please rate...
Comment something about it...
Let me ask you something...
Did you feel my emotion in it..?
I hope you did...
coz I feel terrible...

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  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Gee. you cant get much better than this. this is a very predictable but very sweet tale.

    might be true, might not. but it was tryped perfectly and for that i give you a 5. cause this too was excellent.

    David

  • 19 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    K.. i'm back.. see, you write with such reality in your words that I feel it deep in my heart... great write... 5/5

    Love,
    Ipsita

  • 19 years ago

    by dustin

    Wow, that was a great poem. I did feel your emotion. If there's anything at all I could say to cheer you up let me know

  • 19 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    I....i think i felt all the emotion... i'm sorry, i can't really type--- it was touching..............