Omg...love this poem....its a 5.5...the flow was amazing...the second stanza was amazing

Good poem, although i didn't quite get what you were trying to say.NIce choice of words:)

Your ryme flows like water in a stream! kinda like the rest of your poems!! 5/5

This poem wasn't as well written as your other one but it does have decent enough descriptions. The lips curved in deceit was different, unique, while keeping the lines short again makes the most important descriptions and emotions stand out. You miht want to check the flow of this stanza though since at least I think taking out the word just might improve it:
Simply they say
Thinking too much
Racing, and winning..
But needing just a touch

*sigh* Im getting jealous now.
fav stanza is either the second or the last :) great job babe.

Perfect. 5/5

Great poem very nicely written, keep it up

This 1 was more better 5/5

Your dark poetry seems very mild compared to the ones I have read. You are missing the emotions, the detalied imagery. This poem just seems like a sad poem. However your lines do catch my attention.

I love the rhymes in this one! I like your dark poems!! Its great! I like the discription you used. Keep it up! xx

I like this one... I didn't know what to expect when the title was fingerprints, but I did like it! great job!

Ciao...xx

I agree with Darien. This poem seems like a sad poem than a really dark poem. But I loved the rhymes! They were so original! Which is definately a plus in poetry. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

Erica, my friend.
I believe that you were poems are probably the darkest and most depressing I've read just lately.
this was another poem that i loved alot, it was so dark and chilling. its so creepy thinking about it.
xxxxx

Amazingly written piece you have here. You described everything in this very well with some vivid imagery. The last two lines were my favorite.. those just stood out to me the most. But the whole poem was very well written and flowed very well. The rhyming was good also and didnt seem forced at all.. Great job on this! 5/5 Keep it up!

Can you come visit me to teach me to write poetry as wonderful as you? Please??? This poem is just as lovely as the others I've read, so I just don't know what else to say. :)

This poem was so scary especially those

A lonely perfume
A scent of defeat
Bruised necks, scarred wrists
Lips curved in deceit

Keep this talent up

OoOo...I thought this poem was very creative too where do you come up with these ideas?? I loved this

Vivid imangery, well descriped, the flow was flawless, the word choice was strong, and dripping with emtiuons. Excellent job, on a well written poem. 5/5

This poem was good. I didn't find it as detailed as other poems I've read by you, and I felt as though it was missing something... It was still a great poem. I could definitely feel the emotion you put into it. nice work!

4/5