Wow, I really liked the neding on this!
Em Im a bit confused on what it is about(thats because Im really tired) In parts it strikes me as its about a boy with no home.. like homeless? Im probley wrong but I did like your choice of words and the flow was good! well done on the end i enjoyed it x)

Excellent second stanza, dont change a thing on that one. If this is for school you may want to add more puncation (periods, exclamation marks, what not). Your last stanza needs two more lines, so that your poem follows the same order. Other than that I think this poem is amazing. Great Work