Nice stuff. It is very long but I did not tire of reading it. You use words well and they sound effective but not over-the-top. The ending works well also, you can tell this is the finale you are building up to, however it still manages to sound refreshing. Overall well done.

A bit long poem. but still interesting and touching. i love to comment on ur poems. i find them really great.

Nice poem! Good description of falling in love.