Never ready, without you

by Becky   Nov 12, 2005


I take a tentative step
out into the ice rink
and realize I'm not prepared for this
i don't have my ice skates on

the game starts
the big boys are whizzing around
fighting for the puck
it gets passed to me
i go to take a slap shot
but i realize
i don't have a stick

I'm in the goal now
my team is playing hard
the puck is only just now
nearing the net
i get ready to block it
a slap shot is made
it comes flying at me
and i realize
I'm not ready
i don't have on my pads

i get hit in the head
and am knocked out cold

this is how i feel everyday of my life
never ready
like something is missing
like I'm not ready to start the day

your those ice skates
that will help me walk
your that stick
that will help me win
your those pads
that will keep me safe

don't you see that i need you
i need you if i want to win
if i want to win this game i call life

wow i really like this poem so please vote and comment, i got the idea for this as i was letting my dog outside loll i was thinking about poems and i all of a sudden began thinking about the first couple lines then i really quick ran to the computer and started typing and it all just came out, member if you comment on my poems i will be sure to comment on yours, lots of love *~*Becky*~*

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  • 19 years ago

    by Amanda

    Aww becky this poem is amazing i love you n yes guys suck but u gotta love them sometimes

  • 19 years ago

    by Megadrive

    That was awesome! I weally, weally, like it lol. Only thing... try using more commas and periods to give ur poem a beat and of course it tells the reader when a sentence has ended and a new one has begun.

  • 19 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great job :)

    1 thing in the line:

    "the ball is only just now" the puck turns to a ball??????

  • It makes sence.