by Becky Nov 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I take a tentative step |
by Amanda
Aww becky this poem is amazing i love you n yes guys suck but u gotta love them sometimes |
by Megadrive
That was awesome! I weally, weally, like it lol. Only thing... try using more commas and periods to give ur poem a beat and of course it tells the reader when a sentence has ended and a new one has begun. |
Great job :) |
It makes sence. |