It makes sence.

Great job :)

1 thing in the line:

"the ball is only just now" the puck turns to a ball??????

That was awesome! I weally, weally, like it lol. Only thing... try using more commas and periods to give ur poem a beat and of course it tells the reader when a sentence has ended and a new one has begun.

Aww becky this poem is amazing i love you n yes guys suck but u gotta love them sometimes