by xX-jess-Xx Nov 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
A quite little six year old, |
OK THIS IS SOOOO AMAZING gurl you brang tears to my eyes and i'm thinking in my head "dont cry dont cry" i just hope this poem isn't based on a true story...........it was sooo brilliant. |
by Katlynn
This one was really good. i really liked it and it's very sad. But it shows how the cousin wasn't good enough wasn't being a good relative like we all should be to our familys. You did an amazing job. Very talented. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever. |
Omfg. that is so effing good. omfg. omfg. i love it. keep writing. ill check out ur other stuff also. 5/5. |
Quite different. Quite different. The wording though nice for what it did could be a touch better to make this better yet it is good. Very unique since it was a very different poem. Excellent work. |
by Pure Silence
Very sad, but well done maybe work on the style a bit to make it pop but wonderful! |