I love you.....

by The Poetic Child   Nov 12, 2005


I look in the sky,
and have u in my mind
a smirk on my face,
yes now you are mine

Hugging and laughing
and watching T.V.
forget the shows
its just you and me

turn off the T.V.
and lets begin,
kissing softly
as our love joins in

closing our eyes
our bodies take control
Love so strong
right in the midst of our soul

Spiritual Love,
its that we hold
its Spiritual Love
that gives warmth when were cold

I love u every minute
and every second I'm alive
Sadness turns into happy
when i see that u arrive

just cause where in different schools
don't mean we cant be together
we are strong enough
we can go through the weather

Just like they say
The wetter
the better

Our love that is deep
no one can take
stronger then gold
something no man can break

I'll tell u in three words
what i truly feel about you
here it goes here it is
....I love you.......

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Wow..............i still cannot believe how old you are...and you can write so well...at your age, i didnt care about poetry but then one day one of my teachers told me that since i can write great stories that i should try writing poetry and i tried to write one and became to like it and found out that i was good at it..... keep up the amazing work and dont ever stop kuz you have a real talent for it esp at your age...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww That is so freakin adorable!!! Great job sweetie!!! I love all of your work and this is just another great poem..

  • 19 years ago

    by BeautifulDisaster

    Aw this is so cute, it made me sad cause' of my situation in life right now but it's a beautiful poem, I loved it you have some great talent here, hope everythings well, take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww thats really cute. It really seems like your in love with this guy. O hope everything works out for you guys. GREAT POEM!!! ***Ashley***

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