Ay ay ay...mamita u have it hard...did he really do this to you??? thats baddddddddd.

but i know how u feel about your ex...somehow u just can't forget about him and he is always in your mind...he was your 1st true love ...just like he was mines...i tought that i couldn't live w/o him.(and i cant) and at the end of the day i still think that he is my #1 just cause we have always been there for eachother...when his mom died i was there ...when his dad got shot...literally i was there..(he died)...when everything was wrong i was there...even when he cheated on me...i WAS STILL THERE...mines was like the head of the gang...he is 18 and he knows what he's doing...he is the pretty boy on the streets...every gurl wants him...everyday some girl would call him...btu he wasnt interested he said everything he ever wanted he had in me and i believed him...then we broke up like 4 months ago and he got locked up because he was cought with drugs and found a gun in his pants and so he was locked up for 1 month...we stopped calling...stopped e-mailing...and after he got out i got a phone call...it was HIM...my heart started racing and i didn't know what to do...i answered...he said " mamita no puedo vivir sin ti...tu eres como mi aire ...como mi aqua como todo que necesito que vivir"...and thats all he had to say...i can c that he missed me...especially when he came to c me...he was happi...stopped drugs...stopped guns...stopped everything..it was just me and him in the pic...then he caught me cheating and everything is over...we still talk and we still c eachother...now when i c him we are boyfriend gurlfriend but when he leaves my house he is just another homie...y mija me duele...me duele mucho...no puedo vivir without him...what do i do...?????

Yeah...well i feel you...i am in the same position right now...because he is locked up i don't know 4 how long b-cuz he wont tell me...i mean i need to know...and he wrote me a letter yesterday and he said that he never loved someone as much as me and that i am the only one that was there thru thick and thin and when he gets out he wants us to be together again...o mean i have to be strong...i never considered me and him broken up...its just that we havn't talked for a while then he called and it was an "accident" supposedly...and he didn't hang up...he just asked who am i going out with and if i still love him...my answers were..."no babe" and "yes babe"...i still want to be with him...i told him everything and he did the same...i know i'm young but when love hits you...you just can't get up...thats just my motto...wen i'm with him...everything is PERFECT...but he has to stop with this gangs and selling drugs and drive-byz if he wants to be with me...he killed enuf putos already...i don't need to go out with a killer...i love him and i only want whats best for him and he agreed...that i'm whats best for him...i mean we workin things out...but u got it hard...u gotta wait for him for 3 more yrs...i mean i can tell that u love him and u love your son...but if you don't mind me asking how old is your son...and i don't know...ppl have to be strong...cuz if they aint things will just fall apart if u think about it...we are in the same exact position...only you have a babi...

Thanks for commenting on my poem i means a lot to me. Really it is a good poem. Thank goodness it is not real 5/5 :)

God's greatest sin... was creating man in the first place. then this wouldn't have happened, but then, we wouldn't be here, would we?? great poem. 5/5

Hey mama all i have to say if this was a play (como un teatro) i would stand up and i would just say BRAVO and follow dat with an standing ovation... $ real wow BRUTAL de verdad... You should get an award for this poem i mean i've read alot of poems and all but none like this in my lil world u just won an OSCAR for it.... (me dejastes con la boca abierta) And the poem is true but i mean i don't know why sumtimes he lets things happen.. I guess only god know why?!?! well mami great job n plz write more poems like this they are really deep love it... Cuidate chula 5/5 + 5/5 (if i could lol) =)

Thats a good poem Mine is backwards i was raped by my moms best female friend last week you're the first person i have told

Amazing

Oh this is such a sad poem. And it is truly great. Almost had me crying there. So happy for you that it`s not a true story. Only a shame that these things happen to many children every day. Well..it was a great poem :)