In the beginning, the rhyming was a bit off, but towards the end, the poem starts to get more interestingand I heart how you chose to end this particular poem.
Anthony ,
First I must say ,
Dang you are one hot little cutie in that picture ...
Now I must say I loved this part the most.....
I refuse to give in until I die,
I fall, but I get up again
I am taken in by your strength to never give in , there is so much heartfelt meaning behind these two lines ...
I admire your courage to hold your head up and walk tall , because NO ONE has the right to treat you differently ...
Never give into the ignorant hungers of others that try to feed off of your sadness ...
Your strong will , will overpower all ignorance
Love & Hugs Anthony ...