by Larry Nov 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
sensual love
What actions truly define a kiss? |
by Fig
I love the first and last stanzas, and i like the middle bit like a declaration, and the repetition of it, but im no soo sure on the"strolling the strand" bit. great idea for a poem though. v inspired. |
by N J Thornton
What a lovely way to describe a kiss. I really liked the first stanza, where you define a kiss. Keep up the good work. |