by Jamie Nov 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
I can see it and I can feel it |
by Kayla
Jamie, I want to say thanks for the comment on "Weak", And this one is... good, I don't think that its your best, but it shows more emotion then some of the others, When I read through poems, I try to see if I can feel the emotion and in this one I could... Great Job, Keep Writting... |
by Darien
The first few stanzas, I was like, what's "IT" |
by lindzy
Good job m'dear, it had a good rhythem which makes it flow very well. Its also very passionate which is good. |
by Mona
Good poem, nothing else I can say. Keep up the good work and take care -xxx- Lotsaaaa love! |
by JAY Poet
GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |