Good poem i feel it may need another part or needs to be legthend i feel more can be said using that same poem but thats me its still a good poem

Love Always ~XxX~Mike~XxX~

WoW... that was nice ... rele gud written ... u av the talent and u seem to know wat u r doin so keep it up and always remember to smile ..
:)
Thx for the comment by da way.

Aww hun u are alot more the sand i love you talk soon kk call me love u
robyn

Nice