by myshiningstar14 Nov 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
One breath, one prayer, one life is all it takes. One hug, one smile, one look at you and I'm in heaven. When i hear your voice, i know everything'll be all right, and when I hear you laugh i know we'll make it through. Cause as long as your by my side, we will survive. |
by Cuddles
I adore this poem!! And no, being descriptive isn't bad. All I was saying is that I can picture the scene as I read your poems, and when you're writing that is always a good thing. By the way, you may be only 16, but you probably are better at poems than me. At least I know if you're not then you have the potential to be. Awesome work, girl! |
by yaRis
Hey gurl tanx for commenting on my princess dream poem thanx alot. I like this poem is very nice but what i liked most was your profile and what you said dat's so cute (if i could i would give ur pro a 5/5) thanx againg ciao.... |