Hey gurl tanx for commenting on my princess dream poem thanx alot. I like this poem is very nice but what i liked most was your profile and what you said dat's so cute (if i could i would give ur pro a 5/5) thanx againg ciao....

I adore this poem!! And no, being descriptive isn't bad. All I was saying is that I can picture the scene as I read your poems, and when you're writing that is always a good thing. By the way, you may be only 16, but you probably are better at poems than me. At least I know if you're not then you have the potential to be. Awesome work, girl!